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11/05/2012

A story about a wolf called Dark Frost

Filed under: - ARCHIVE 2011-12 — @ 14:01

It was a dark misty night and the moon was shinning brightly. Dark frost looked around and then ran really fast getting ready to hunt. The moon was at its brightes point. The ground began to get colder and colderand the leaves were wet. When the wolf saw the ground was shaking, he tried to dig his razor sharp claws into the ground but the wind was so bad he got thrown onto a rock.

When the ground stopped shaking, Dark frost looked around and then carried on running and running until he was tired.



4 Comments »

  1. We loved it because it really makes us want to read on and there it a lot of discriptived writing.From Lingwood Primary School.

      Charlotte & Rhys — 15/05/2012 @ 12:17

  2. Hello Lauren, we’re from Lingwood and we really like your story. It sounds really scary. We would like to hear more of the story.

    By Elisha & George Sole

      Elisha and George sole — 15/05/2012 @ 12:21

  3. Well done Lauren! What a great story if you write another story please post it, that would be great!

    Bye for now, Lily and George!

      Lily and George — 15/05/2012 @ 12:24

  4. Wow Lauren – your writing and use of language has really improved. Keep up the good work.

      Mr Campbell — 15/05/2012 @ 21:35

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