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Literacy Story Begining

Filed under: - ARCHIVE 2011-12 — @ 13:33

The sun beat down while the canyons were quiet. Lottie licked her velvet paws and swished her short but fluffy fur. Suddenly ledges started to cracked away furiously! Giant blocks were falling by now, but no animals were crushed. They grew closer and closer and a final crack would end it all! As Lotties front paw went vertically down, the rest of her followed.

When her eyelids opened, finding herself on a ledge was a scare! Her fur puffed up in fear but there was nothing she could do…

1 Comment »

  1. Beautiful use of language. Keep up the great effort. I shall look forward to reading on.

      Mr Campbell — 15/05/2012 @ 21:57

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