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My begining of a story!

Filed under: - ARCHIVE 2011-12 — @ 13:34

Rain drops dripped from the braches of the trees and the sun went down over the horizon. Lolly sat under a big leaf and put her long velvet tail around her face like a scarf. Suddenly the sky began to rumble. The first few drops started to fall, a storm was coming. Everything in the Rainforest started to become damp and lightning struk everywhere you looked. Lolly started to tremble, she wrapped her tail even tighter around her. Suddenly Lolly heard alot of huge rain drops soak the Rainforest.

Suddenly Lolly heared a huge crack and the tree, which Lolly was sat on, started to tip, she was terrified. It all ended with a huge thump and poor Lolly fell uncontious.


  1. Rose. 4 words. I WANT TO READ ON!!! Well done

      Mr Campbell — 15/05/2012 @ 21:56

  2. Clealry meant 5 words!

      Mr Campbell — 15/05/2012 @ 21:56

  3. Thank you for leaving a comment. Which five words?

      Rose J — 18/05/2012 @ 13:14

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