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11/05/2012

My Story Starter

Filed under: - ARCHIVE 2011-12 — @ 13:32

The sun was dazzeling in the sky. The sand was as soft as velvet. Frankie was looking out of her bowcony to shore. On the boat, everything was silent then there was a rumble. It  was a earthquake! Everyone fell in the sea because the boat was up side down. Screeming, Frankie was pushed under a wave.

When she woke up. She was on a lovely beach on a island. Everyone on the boat who was on the beach was so hungry, they all serched around the island for food but there was none.



5 Comments »

  1. Hello Emily we are from Lingwood!This post is great.It sounds like the Titanic with the shipwreck.

      Luke and Andie — 15/05/2012 @ 12:26

  2. yes it is like the Titanic

      Emily — 18/05/2012 @ 13:10

  3. My word. I hope the survivors find food! Were there any serious injuries?

      Mr Campbell — 15/05/2012 @ 21:58

  4. Thank you yes they do find food and there are no serious injuries

      Emily — 18/05/2012 @ 13:08

  5. Hi Charlie and Katie here from lingwood.The story opening realy interesting.We liked how you used adjectives and adverbs.

      Katie&Charlie — 10/07/2012 @ 12:33

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