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11/05/2012

My Story Starter

Filed under: - ARCHIVE 2011-12 — @ 13:29

The grey clouds moved over her head and began to darken. Evie ran back home and got a blanket. There was a storm. The lightning knocked down trees and made the windows clatter. Trees fell furisoly as their roots were ripped from the ground. Evie ran upstairs, but the storm was so strong it whiped her out of the window.

When the lightning eased off , she was floating down in the bright blue sky. Crying with hunger and missing her home, she floated in mid air with nothing but clouds and trees above her.



1 Comment »

  1. My best bit. ‘Roots were ripped from the ground.’ I can just picture it.
    Well done!

      Mr Campbell — 15/05/2012 @ 22:00

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