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11/05/2012

Story Opening – Monkey

Filed under: - ARCHIVE 2011-12 — @ 13:59

The hole in the muddy ground was deep muddy dark and wet.  The monkey thet was called clive was a cute monkey and small.  He went over by the hole.  The hole was scarry and dark you could not see anything.  The hole was massive and real deep.  The monkey was small but awsome.



5 Comments »

  1. Hey I Love Monkeys!
    Good Story Opening Zak, I Really Enjoyed Reading It.

      Jake J — 14/05/2012 @ 05:40

  2. Hello Zak, we’re from Lingwood and we really like your story opening. It makes us want to read some more of the story. It’s very descriptive! Well done!

    [ By Elisha & George Sole ]

      Elisha and George Sole — 15/05/2012 @ 12:26

  3. Hi Zak we are from Lingwood Primary school.We like your story opening it was very discriptive.Hope to hear from you at our blog. Adam and Georgia.

      Georgia and Adam. — 15/05/2012 @ 12:30

  4. Great story exctract Zac, hopefully you can tell us the rest of the story soon!

    Bye for now, Lily and George.

      Lily and George — 15/05/2012 @ 12:31

  5. Well done Zac – keep up the great work. What does it feel like getting a comment from pupils at Lingwood Primary?

      Mr Campbell — 15/05/2012 @ 21:37

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