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11/05/2012

Story opening – The jungle

Filed under: - ARCHIVE 2011-12 — @ 13:46

The jungle got set on fire by some people. The monkey fainted from the hotness the fire blew around him and all the trees came down. The fire killed all the anamals.



2 Comments »

  1. Hi Brandon. We think it’s a realy good opening. We think we will read this story because you made it sound really exciting.
    From Charlie and Katie

      Charlie and Katie — 15/05/2012 @ 12:20

  2. What a terrible tradgedy Brandon. I hope they catch the people that started the fire!

      Mr Campbell — 15/05/2012 @ 21:45

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