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11/05/2012

Story opening – The Wave

Filed under: - ARCHIVE 2011-12 — @ 13:40

It was a windy day in California and the Malibu beach was deserted. Jake was stroling around the hollister shop when the sea suddenly enlarged. A wave grew tall. The wave grew taller and it rushed towards the palms trees. Jake noticed the beach was covered in water.

As Jake ran backwards, he ran in to a pole. Muscles rippling, Jake was unconcious.



1 Comment »

  1. Well done Zac – a great story start. How would Jake be feeling? can you describe his feelings through his actions?

      Mr Campbell — 15/05/2012 @ 21:52

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